Storm

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Photo: Courtesy of John Kelsey

Storms knife edge
Slicing into being
Cutting deep
Calloused scars open

Healing yet again
Heart still beating
Never doubtful
Never fall

Stoic

 
Storms knife edge
Slice into being
Cut deeply
Calloused scars open

Healed yet again
Heart still beats
Never doubtful
Never fall

Stoic

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2 comments on “Storm

  1. Try using the simple present tense over the present participles (-ings). See how you like the poem.

  2. Thank you Wayfarer, constructive input is always welcome.
    I made a few changes above, please let me know what you think. – Stephen

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