Storm

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Photo: Courtesy of John Kelsey

Storms knife edge
Slicing into being
Cutting deep
Calloused scars open

Healing yet again
Heart still beating
Never doubtful
Never fall

Stoic

 

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2 comments on “Storm

  1. Try using the simple present tense over the present participles (-ings). See how you like the poem.

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  2. Thank you Wayfarer, constructive input is always welcome.
    I made a few changes above, please let me know what you think. – Stephen

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